bedtime stories

Very unique and practically perfect in every way! The lighting, the color, and the pose all fit together so nicely! However, the black line on the side is somewhat distracting from the main point of this shot because it's wide and is a sudden cut off from the bright colors. Try thinning it or getting rid of it entirely so that veiwers can enjoy the main point of the photo without the distraction of a black blur, which alost acts as a thumb on the lens. Other than that, it's a wonderful and beautiful shot of a young girl appearing to be reading in bed. Keep up the good work!